Tuesday, 29 July 2008

Dangerous Job - Amazing Life

Write the opening to an incident which was dangerous and exciting.

You could be any of the following people involved in an exciting incident:
  • police officer
  • fire officer
  • mountain rescuer
  • soldier
  • paramedic

Think about the dramatic and dangerous incident - make it really exciting!

  • make a list of adjectives that you could use to create danger
  • show different points of view
  • use adverbs
  • set the scene carefully
  • build up tension

Have a look at your Opening - have you shown the danger?

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