Write the opening to an incident which was dangerous and exciting.
You could be any of the following people involved in an exciting incident:
- police officer
- fire officer
- mountain rescuer
- soldier
- paramedic
Think about the dramatic and dangerous incident - make it really exciting!
- make a list of adjectives that you could use to create danger
- show different points of view
- use adverbs
- set the scene carefully
- build up tension
Have a look at your Opening - have you shown the danger?
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