Saturday 11 October 2008

Open it by adding more detail and making it interesting

You could play this game with a friend. Tell your friend a boring sentence such as:
Tasneem went to the park.

Can they add more detail and make it more interesting?

  • Tasneem trudged angrily to the park.

If you think your friend can do better ask them to try again!

  • Long-haired Tasneem, who had a chocolate-chip ice cream, trudged angrily to the park because she had a meeting with an alien, to discuss something important.

Thanks to Tasneem for this example.

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