Tasneem went to the park.
Can they add more detail and make it more interesting?
- Tasneem trudged angrily to the park.
If you think your friend can do better ask them to try again!
- Long-haired Tasneem, who had a chocolate-chip ice cream, trudged angrily to the park because she had a meeting with an alien, to discuss something important.
Thanks to Tasneem for this example.